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Outside Characters: Hannah's China Clothes by MonstarzGirl
Outside Characters: Hannah's China Clothes
For :iconoslocarter:'s story "The Outside Characters", this is :iconoslocarter: OC Hannah dressed up for China when the characters go to the world of Mulan.

While in China, she would be getting along well with Mulan, Shang, Mushu, Cri-Kee, Khan, Yao, Ling, and Chien-Po. Like Victoria (me) She wouldn't get along well with Shan-Yu and his Hun army, along with the Matchmaker and Chi-Fu.

Left to right: Hannah's dress for being in presence of the Emperor and here's her training/combat clothes.  

I only own my OC Victoria; the story and Hannah belong to :iconoslocarter: respectfully as the movie Mulan and the characters belongs to Disney respectfully as well.

Made using: www.azaleasdolls.com/heroine.h…
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Outside Characters: Yvette's China Clothes by MonstarzGirl
Outside Characters: Yvette's China Clothes
For :iconoslocarter:'s story "The Outside Characters", this is :iconoslocarter: OC Yvette dressed up for China when the characters go to the world of Mulan.

While in China, she would be giving trouble to Chi-Fu, the Matchmaker, and Shan-Yu. She would be helping Victoria (me) giving good insults at Chi-Fu as well.

Left to right: Yvette's dress for being in presence of the Emperor and here's her training/combat clothes.  

I only own my OC Victoria; the story and Yvette belong to :iconoslocarter: respectfully as the movie Mulan and the characters belongs to Disney respectfully as well.
Made using: www.azaleasdolls.com/heroine.h…
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Reaching his hands out and untying the black cloth from behind Victoria's head, Rameses ripped off the blindfold from Victoria's eyes with ease and froze. Everyone gasps to see Victoria's blue eyes, which they have never seen before and is the first time. Victoria blinked her eyes to focus her vision and looked around the room to see Pharaoh Seti, Queen Tuya, the priests, Moses, and Rameses. The prince still held the black cloth and exhaled slowly. He must not lose his temper. How would it look for a lowly prisoner, a girl no less, to cause him to lose control? He must conduct himself as befitted a future pharaoh. Rameses glanced around the room at his parents, the priests, and his brother.

He thought to himself, What were they thinking? Would they want me to agree to her challenge and ask her another question? Or did they think I should show restraint and ignore her? Perhaps the best thing to do was simply to ask.

Turning his back on the girl, the prince faced the Pharaoh and said in a calmer voice, "Father, shall I indulge the prisoner or do you tire of her lies? Shall I have her sent away?"

Tuya looked at her husband and said, "Seti, this is taking long. The young woman must have been through so much trauma from losing her parents and being brought over here like some common criminal. She doesn't even sound like she's lying." Tuya could easily see a handprint on the young woman's face and realized that one of the guards struck her before they brought her to the palace.

Seti listened to the queen for a moment and then took a long look at his son. He was not sure if he thought the young woman sounded truthful or not. He did, however, agree with Tuya that the whole affair was taking too long. He was an important man and had many things to do. Whatever Rameses was going to do, he wanted it done soon. Seti said, "My son, your mother tires of this and I grow weary myself."

Rameses couldn't believe that his father didn't answer his question, then he asked quietly, "You wish me to send her away then?"

"I did not say that."

Rameses asked again, "Then you wish me to release her?"

"I did not say that either."

The prince stood in a stunned silence for a few moments. What was his father doing? What did he want from him? Finally, he lowered his voice even farther and admitted, "I am not certain I understand. What do you want me to do?"

Seti sighed and shook his head slowly, "All afternoon you have been eager to make decisions. Just now when I give you one to make, you hesitate." He could see his eldest son blush ever so slightly, which only frustrated him even more. Rameses said, "But..."

Seti cuts him off and says, "Silence. Pharaoh speaks. I do not think we are going to get to the bottom of this matter here and now, so I will decide what to do with her. We have no evidence that she is a spy or a thief, but we also do not have any to prove that she is not. She will be given a room here in the palace tonight, trusting that she is innocent."

Rameses spoke up, "But..."

Seti continued, "Silence. I am not finished. I am not the old fool you think I am. She will have a guard with her at all times, while she is being held here."

"So she is part prisoner, part Pharaoh's guest," Moses mumbled to no one in particular.

Rameses was dumbfounded. He had never seen his father deal with a prisoner this way before, but then again he had never dared to meddle in the sentencing of a prisoner before. Perhaps his father's unusual decision was a result of his presence. All he knew for certain was that this woman had made a fool of him in front of his father and he would never forgive her for it!

Seti clapped his hands and spoke to the guards, "Now take her to a room and get her cleaned up." He looked Victoria up and down for a moment before adding, "And find her something appropriate to wear. Also, do not forget that she is to be guarded at all times. So let it be written, so let it be done." He added to indicate that he was finished and they had his permission to leave.

Victoria felt her arms being held and was dragged away from the royals. She shouted as tears began to form in her eyes and turned her head to Seti, "YOU CAN'T DO THIS! ROYALTY OR NOT, THIS IS UNJUST! I HAVE MY RIGHTS!" Once again, she felt a slap to her face and one of the guards snapped, "Shut your mouth!" Moses sees this and goes towards the guards to stop the cruelty the poor girl is going through. However, he felt his arm being held by Rameses and sighed in defeat.

Rameses watched as the young woman was dragged off with an angry scowl on his face. He thought to himself, A day without food and water ought to teach her a lesson.

"Rameses, Moses, you have my leave to go. I shall see you at dinner tonight," said the great Pharaoh as he waved his hand dismissively.

"Yes, Father," his oldest son said with a respectful nod. He took Moses by the arm to lead him out the door. Ordinarily he would have wanted to talk the incident over with his brother, but Rameses was so cross he said nothing as they walked along together.

Moses opened his mouth to speak more than once, but somehow couldn't find anything to say. This had all been very strange. He was surprised at himself for caring what happened to a prisoner and he was even more surprised that Rameses cared. Suddenly, a thought occurred to him and he started to laugh out loud. The older prince turned and stared at him with a frown, "What are you laughing about?"

"I am sorry," Moses said through his chuckles, "I just thought of something."

"Well, what is it?" Rameses said impatiently. "I certainly did not see anything funny about all that!"

"I think I know what made us act so peculiar about that prisoner."

"What? The fact that she's arrogant, impudent, unpleasant, and likely a criminal of some sort?" Rameses snorted sarcastically.

"No," Moses answered with a large grin. "I think it's that she is a woman."

Rameses nearly choked. "What? What in the world does that have to do with anything?"

Moses said, "Think about it, Rameses. How many women do you and I know? Other than Mother and the occasional servant, we never see women. Here was a strange and spirited one who wasn't..." He paused for a moment and winked, "All that bad looking under all the dirt and the blindfold."

The firstborn groaned and ran a hand over his nearly bald head, "Moses, how can think of that sort of thing when she is a prisoner? She was uncouth, barbaric, and for one who talked so much about men wanting to do indecent things to her! She was certainly dressed like a harlot!"

"So you did not find her at all attractive?" the younger man asked, rolling his eyes disbelievingly.

"I... uh..." Rameses stammered as he began to blush slightly. "I hadn't really thought about it. I was thinking of her as a prisoner, a thief, or a spy instead of a woman." He hated it when Moses teased him about women and about who he would have for a queen someday. Then again, he often teased his younger brother right back. Still, this was an uncomfortable topic and it was much more awkward after what had just happened. "She tried to make a fool of me," he muttered. "How could I find that attractive?"

Moses shrugged, "Well, I sort of noticed that look you had on your face. When you were looking at her, I can almost imagine what you were thinking when you were looking at the blindfold over her eyes. You could almost wonder what her eyes look like. We've never seen anyone with such light skin and brown hair with bits of gold in the strands. Her eyes are a different color than what we usually see from everyone, including the slaves."

Rameses looked at his younger brother and thought about the features of the young woman. Her figure isn't too skinny or too fat, but it is somehow perfect. Her body looks slender, but it has curves in the right places. Her hair is long and reaches past her shoulder blades in a chocolate color with bits of golden highlights when the sunrays shine on her hair. Under the dirt, her skin is like ivory. Her blue eyes looked beautiful as they almost resembled the sky on a clear day.

"That is absurd," Rameses snapped. "I thought nothing of the kind. She is a prisoner and I have no interest in commoners, much less prisoners. Honestly, Moses, sometimes I have no idea where you get your ideas. You can be such a dreamer sometimes." With that, Rameses turned his back and waited until he heard his brother leave the room.

When Moses was gone, Rameses continued to head slowly towards his bedchambers. As he walked, his mind was racing. All he could think about was that girl. He kept seeing her lovely face with pale skin such as he had never seen floating through his imagination. His nimble fingers longed to find out if those cascades of brunette colored waves down her back were as soft as they looked. His ears were filled with the sound of her voice. His nose was filled with her exotic scent. Even when he closed his eyes, he could not escape her.

At last, the prince reached his rooms and entered hurriedly. What was wrong with him? Why couldn't he put the prisoner out of his mind? Was Moses right? Was he attracted to that obnoxious woman? He couldn't be and yet what other explanation was there for these thoughts?

Rameses walked across the room and parted a filmy curtain that led out onto a small balcony. Stepping outside, a gentle breeze greeted him and caressed his sun-kissed skin. As he gazed at the Nile in the distance, he drew in a deep breath and held it. He was reluctant to let it out as if he hoped that somehow the fresh evening air would somehow cleanse his mind of the unwanted thoughts.

To his relief, clarity seemed to come when bidden. The other thoughts and feelings he'd experienced during the fiasco with the prisoner flooded over him once again. The infuriating thought that she'd tried to make a fool of him and the stinging knowledge that because of her, he had embarrassed himself in front of his father once again filled his mind. The worry that this woman could be a criminal and a danger to his family also nagged at him. What was his father thinking giving her a room in the palace as if she were a guest?

Suddenly, all the anger and hatred he had felt at first replaced all the interest he'd felt a moment ago. No, Moses was not right. It was exactly as Rameses had said. She was a common prisoner and nothing else. If his brother really believed that he felt anything for her, then he was a fool! His head finally clear and his worries calmed, the eldest prince of Egypt stepped back into his room and flopped onto his bed as his hand dropped the black cloth he was holding onto earlier to the floor. Closing his eyes with a relieved sigh, it wasn't long before he slept.
Delivering Hearts: Ch 3

How was that one? Looks like Victoria is given a room, but no one believes her. Plus, two princes are having mixed feelings about her. I only own Victoria (my OC and me); the movie and characters belong to DreamWorks. I hope you like where this is going so far! Kind reviews and comments are accepted.

Also, my pal :iconaspiring-author: added the quote from the classic film The Ten Commandments; we both love that movie! The movie belongs to Paramount respectfully.

RP List:

:iconmonstarzgirl: : Victoria, guards, Hotep and Huy, etc.

:iconaspiring-author: : Rameses, Pahraoh Seti, etc.

Shared roles: Moses, Queen Tuya, etc.

Next chapter: monstarzgirl.deviantart.com/ar…

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I'm still in the rut of fixing up my fanfics and one-shots with the tenses. I'm half-way done though and maybe try to get started in uploading my Gargoyles fanfics, my Space Jam fanfics, two of my Mummy stories, and even two new ones: one for my Tarzan fanfics that takes place in the Legend of Tarzan series with modern twists and a sequel to my PPG story. I'll need a ton of ideas for those two stories, along with some help in role-playing my Prince of Egypt fanfic "Delivering Hearts" due to lack of ideas and not hearing a response from my rp friend :iconaspiring-author: Forgive me for being slow, but I've been REALLY busy with cosmetology classes. Instead of working with hair, I'll be focusing on being a nail technician (doing manis/pedis) and learning about esthetics (facials/makeup).

As for my Powerpuff story, I'm happy with how it turned out, but I still have to tweak some bits and pieces to add details in along with fixes up some of the tenses. Forgive me if I delete and repost some (or in this case most) of the chapters to the story "Rebecca Utonium: Beauty and Brains" due to some ancient comments from two years ago when I first wrote this story. :blush:

I'll also try to post up some more OC outfits for Victoria (me) and :iconkaylakisseskangaroos: OC Kayla for my pal :iconoslocarter: fanfic "The Outside Characters" for Book 1 and for an upcoming Book 2.
Anywho, I also wish everybody a Happy Saint Patrick's Day.
I'm glad to temporarily be Irish on this day!
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I love anything from Disney movie classics, especially Beauty and the Beast, Hunchback of Notre Dame, etc. I have 4 dogs and a bunny. I have HUGE sweet tooth for sweets like candy, desserts, ice cream, cakes, and brownies.

I loved watching the Cartoon Cartoons (Ed, Edd, n Eddy, Johnny Bravo, Powerpuff Girls, Dexter's Lab). I even loved watching the Disney cartoons from the old Mickey Mouse cartoons, Gargoyles, House of Mouse, Kim Possible, Lilo and Stitch the Series, etc.

I'm also a fanfiction writer. I wrote some fanfics on Space Jam, The Black Cauldron, The Lion King, Tarzan, The Phantom of the Opera, Gargoyles, The Powerpuff Girls, and more. You're welcome to check them out and send nice reviews/faves. :)

I WRITE AND DO FAN-ART/FANFICS FOR FUN, NOT FOR PROFIT!!! NO MEAN COMMENTS OR FLAMES, PLEASE!!!

For the new cover stories for my fanfics, I'd like to give a special thanks to my friend grapejuice101 from Fanfiction.net and polyvore.com. She did covers for my Phantom of the Opera fanfic, Tarzan fanfic, The Mummy fanfics, and Gargoyles fanfics.

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NightAngelGirl Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
 good lord i need to finish reading your delivering hearts! :shakefist:  bad bad Angel for lacking behind!! lol X3
anyway hows things been? ;)
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MonstarzGirl Featured By Owner 2 days ago
Okay.
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NightAngelGirl Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
 cool :) 
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MonstarzGirl Featured By Owner 1 day ago
Sorry for the deletion of some chapters and reposting; had to make revisions.
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katamariluv Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Recently I heard a very beautiful song, which reminded me a bit of Rebecca and Mojo, which I would like to share with you:www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tm21CA…
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MonstarzGirl Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015
I heard that song and it's pretty.
:D
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katamariluv Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, you're very kind! :) I can imagine Becca and Mojo dancing to this.
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MonstarzGirl Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015
Me too.
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Katharine-Elizabeth Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015
Thank you for the favorites.
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MonstarzGirl Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015
You're welcome.
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